craiglieberman

Ok fellas, uses changes you've suggested, we've moved towards a new format. This is the first move in that direction. The next episode will complete the transformation. Hopefully, we're moving in the right direction.<ul><li><a href="http://videos.streetfire.net/video/EPISODE-13-Sex-The-SMG_170593.htm">http://videos.streetfire.net/video/EPISODE-13-Sex-The-SMG_170593.htm</a</li></ul>

Bob W.

honestly, I ff'ed through half of the car wash scene....I know I've said this before, but I want to see girls who bring more to the table that just a great body. I understand the difficulty in doing that, but it just isn't that interesting without some sort of dialog...even if the dialog sucks, that would be better than nothing. At the very least it would be something to mock and laugh at, rather than flipping to a different channel.

sparkhill

This was a great improvement, I really liked the car segment - it made me want to go buy a M5. I liked the narration and car shots. Great details.

It's just hard to pull off the bikini part. Probably not easy to find girls who are smart, classy and can talk. I think Bob is correct about having them do something other than dance like a stripper. Maybe you could intersperse the bikini and the driving parts?

I think someone may have metioned it before but what about an intro like this:
<i>show car and girl side by side and have graphics come onscreen one line at a time</i>
BMW M5 ---------- Amber
5.0L V-10 -------- 36-25-35
500.1 BHP -------- 5'5"
4300 lbs --------- 105 lbs
$83,900 (MSRP)---- $500 (2 hours)

Regardless, this one is a big step up in quality. Good job.

craiglieberman

We get girls who are just not video trained, that is, they really aren't tech experts and so to try and pass them off as that doesn't work.

For show #15 (in two weeks) we're having her point to car features, throw switches, touch buttons, open the hood, etc. then ride along briefly, drive it once briefly, then do the car wash.

By default (and lack of budget) yours truly will step in at a futile attempt to mimic Jeremy Clarkson...God I hate my own voice on tape...but at least I can provide legit tech data. Plus, I can at least drive the car semi aggressively. I think the original concept was to AVOID having any host, but it's clear that the show needs something of substance to appeal both to car nuts and to perverts.


Again, thank you ALL for your input, suggestions and critiques.

wish76

2nd the "Comparing Specs" segment

TwentyValveB5+S4

but I'm in agreement here.